This story is a part of Monday’s Finish the Story challenge by Barbara Beacham. To participate, please click here: https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/03/16/mondays-finish-the-story-march-16th-2015/
The story begins with: “A body suddenly crashed through a plate glass window at the Brigadier’s house.” The sleeping Brigadier got up with a start and immediately reached for his gun. He sensed that someone was lying unconscious on the floor and there were bits of glasses all around.
The unconscious man groaned in pain, the Brigadier was sure he was the enemy’s spy who has somehow fallen in his own trap. Any moment, the man would regain consciousness. The Brigadier covered the man with his gun and reached for the phone.
“Please, please don’t inform anyone,” the man begged in a broken voice. “Don’t move or I will shoot,” said the Brigadier. The man said, “If you switch on the lights, you’ll know, why I don’t want you to inform anyone. If the word goes out, they will stop believing in me.”
“Who are ‘they’? Asked the Brigadier as he switched on the light. There on the floor was an old Spiderman. “The kids, friend,” the Spiderman grimaced.
Ahh, what a cute story!!
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Loved this Shivangi! Who would ever expect Spider Man to come crashing through a window? Loved the way you wove your story! See you next week? I hope so and thanks for participating! Be well…. ^..^
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Thank you…Barbara:)
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🙂
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good one! I didn’t expect that ending 🙂
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Great that you liked it:)
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So even superheroes get old. No hope for me, then?
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Haha…i guess so..
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Aw, bless 🙂 Not as limber as once he was, poor Spidey!
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A nice surprise at the end there, Shivangi.I sympathise with the ageing Spiderman. Getting older is definitely no fun at all! 🙂
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I know : However what I like about America and the West is that generally old people here are totally young at heart.
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Good story with the Spiderman twist. Sad to say we all get older and it isn’t fun until you adapt to retirement and can do what you want to do. 🙂
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Yes, you are right Susan.
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Great twist at the end, Shivangi. Poor Spiderman. Not the man he used to be. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you for your beautiful words
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Story told cutely, yes Spiderman would be missed by his Fans.
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Thanks a lot Seenu😀
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