He knew it was late. His mother would be anxiously waiting for him but he wanted to dilly dally. He wished, she could come down to receive him at the bus stop just like she used to do! But these days she was always busy with the whining little thing, they brought from the hospital.
It was his dream to be a big brother but now he realised how challenging it was. The baby was a cranky one. If only they could replace her with a sweet, sleepy baby! He no longer liked being a big brother. He wanted constant attention from his parents more than ever.
Dragging his feet, he went home. His mother was at the door with the baby. She reproached him for loitering around. But the cranky one smiled. He ignored her. But she cooed again and held out her baby hand.
His feelings changed from dejection to exhilaration! She was quite cute, after all!
(This is my entry to the flash fiction challenge, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers hosted by the lovely Priceless Joy. We are given a photo prompt and approximately 75-175 words with which to create our stories. This challenge is open to all who would like to participate. Thank you Jessica Haines for the image. Please CLICK HERE for more.)
I was the whiny baby in my family, I hope my older sister didn’t find me too difficult to get on with! Sweet take.
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Thanks a lot Iain😀. I guess every child gets affected a little due to arrival of a sibling but they adjust because adjustment comes easily to them. 😀
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Hahaha! This reminds me of my kids when they were young! LOL! I imagine that is exactly how big brothers feel. Such a cute story, Shivangi!
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So glad you liked it PJ. Thank You😀
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:o)
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Reactions to babies change daily I found. Lovely tale Shivangi..
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True Michael. Thanks a lot😀
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such a lovely representation of what must happen in most families when the new baby comes – loved your soft and steady flow of words.
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Such a lovely, kind comment. Thanks a lot😀
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My daughter though she loved her younger brother took some time in adjusting to little facts… when he could do his business in a diaper, why should he always be held gently why was he given priority when he was an infant… took a month but eventually she took over his responsibility completely and became more of his mommy than his big sister
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Hahaha… thank you for sharing this. The older siblings do feel left out initially but they adapt beautifully. 😀😀😀
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Thanks a lot dear for coming over
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My pleasure entirely… I got to read something wonderful and a free trip down the memory lane😘
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So kind of you😘😀😀
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Nice!
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Thanks a lot😀
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Sweet story! Babies have a way of winning even the hardest heart. He just needed that certain response from her and now I’m sure he is feeling much better and accepting her into the family.
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Am the big sister here…Yes these things go exactly as you said but i feel funny thinking now.
And what should be done to participate?
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Hehehe yes. Thank you. If you want to participate write a story based on the picture in 100-175 words. Then copy the link and paste it in the linkup to FFFAW by clicking the froggy. Check out my click here at the end of the story to know more.
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No account to be made right to get some code ?
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No… not at all.
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Ok will try this.Thank you 💕
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Most welcome😀👍
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Aww, very sweet 🙂
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Thank you Ali😀
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Reading ur blog after a long time. Refreshing and crisp as always.
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Welcome back Sharat. Thank you😀
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So nice,loved your write up!
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Thanks a lot😀
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A baby’s smile is a beautiful thing. Very nice take.
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Thank you YS😀
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awwww. this is such a lovely take. and sooooo soooo cute! 😀 😀 😀
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Thank you😀😊
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I love they way you have written this! I’m sure this a common situation.
Click to read my story!
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Thank you Keith, yours was too good! Just left a message as Shivi😀
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The tale of most bigger children. haaaahhhhaaa
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Glad you liked it Joan. Thank ypu!
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I can identify with the ‘big brother’ in your sweet story, Shivangi. I was three when my sister was born and I was insanely jealous of the attention she got. The jealousy didn’t last long, fortunately and we soon became very close, and still are. The part about the cute little smile that won him over is lovely. 🙂
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Thank you Millie for your sweet comment. Glad to know your story too! Yes, sibling jealousy is usually harmless and soon love replaces it.
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Cute, this one made Made me laugh. It’s true for siblings, babies are nothing special until they can connect with them. I have a feeling as the baby grows he’ll like being a big brother better 🙂
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Right Mandi.. thanks a lot for coming over😀
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My oldest seemed to immediately accept his new brother. I wonder if he had any “I wish I wasn’t a new brother” moments. Makes me think…
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Great Nona. Some kids are very accommodating. Thanks a lot for coming over😀
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