I saw her approach. She stopped and looked at my direction for a heart throbbing moment. Then, looked away. The perfumed breeze played with her long dark hair, integrating her with the colourful autumn landscape. Her flowing floral dress matched her peaches and cream complexion while red roses seemed to bloom in those cheeks.
I was overwhelmed by the sudden brightening of the world due to her presence. The clear sky, blue lake, vibrant foliage, provided a fitting background to her supple form. Could such beauty exist? Was she a figment of my imagination?
I started to write. It had been long since I wrote a word inspite of my self imposed exile in this cottage. Day after day, I had struggled with the dreaded writer’s block. But she appeared and my whole world changed.I needed to immortalise her in my work.
A gentle knock jolted me out of my reverie. I put my pen down and peeped through the window. The damsel stood at my door…the evening sun formed a halo around her lovely head. I couldn’t believe my luck…!!
( The title has been borrowed from Lord Byron’s famous poem “She Walks in Beauty”. The great romantic age poet wrote this poem to celebrate virtuousness and beauty.)
This is my entry to the flash fiction challenge, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers hosted by the lovely Priceless Joy. We are given a photo prompt and approximately 75-175 words with which to create our stories. This challenge is open to all who would like to participate. For more information, please CLICK HERE. Image courtesy pixabay.com
I can imagine his smile and how his heart pounds.
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I attempted a love story this time… Thanks a lot for reading and appreciating๐
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Wonderful description, Shivangi. Beautiful story.
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Thanks a lot dear๐
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I love the details you’ve added to your writing – beautiful!
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Thanks a lot for reading and appreciating๐
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Wonderful story, Shivangi, and I love all the fantastic descriptions! Great story!
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Thank you PJ. So glad you liked it๐
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I did! ๐
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I love the idea of the whole world brightening when she appears ๐
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Thank you, Ali๐๐๐๐
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Gorgeous, Shivangi ๐
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Glad you liked it:)
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Quite a description. Nicely done.
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Thanks a lot YS๐๐๐
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Wonderful detail of him being so mesmerized with her beauty. She really lights up his world. I believe he has something to write about that he can expand on. ๐
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True Lucky… Thanks a lot for coming over๐
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