“Are you laughing at me,” I asked my four year old when I heard him laughing loudly at the local florist. He shook his head and said, “No, I am laughing with them,” he pointed at no one in particular.
I looked around. There were all kinds of beautiful flowers. We were the only customer at that little shop in the outskirts of the city. He continued laughing and made faces. I asked him to stop acting funny. He explained, “Mumma, just look at those two big happy faces. They are sticking their tongues out.”
I was horrified but then I looked closely and saw what he was seeing. The cute orchids appeared to be sticking their tongues out. I laughed.
Both of us had seen the same thing, only his perspective was happier.
This story is a part of Mondays Finish the Story by Barbara Beacham. This is a flash fiction challenge where a new photo and the opening sentence is provided. The challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words. Click here to take up the challenge: https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com
Really those are two big happy faces i think same as your’s 🙂 🙂
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Thank you for reading 🙂
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welcome
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this is such impressive and with great details. I enjoyed reading it which brings a great value!!
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What an imagination you have Shivangi! I loved that this took place in a florists shop! Stay tuned and be well… ^..^
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Thank you so much for liking and appreciating…means a lot to me 🙂
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It means a lot to me that you take the time to write for the MFtS challenge! Be well…
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Thank you Barbara…it is a wonderful challenge and the prompts and the opening lines are so inviting…I just can’t escape 🙂
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Thank you for the lovely compliment! I have done my job! 🙂
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They do kind of look like they are laughing with their tongues sticking out. One even looks like it has two front teeth. LOL! Cute story!
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Lovely and tender piece. A pleasure to read.
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So cute…
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Thank you Nimi 🙂
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Nice story, typical behaviour for a four year old. loved it.
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Sweet story, Shivangi! You capture the joy and positive outlook of the four year old really well. 🙂
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I am so happy that you liked it 🙂
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You write, i read, i smile and i sleep – reading your tales for a good night sleep… Awesome work dear.
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I read, I like, I smile. 🙂 👍
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That’s such a sweet story! To see life through the eyes of a four year old 🙂
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Thank u so much for appreciating..and taking out the time to comment…:)
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Beautiful story Shiivani~ So true, Often very young eyes see more than he world–weary eyes of adults ~ I smiled 🙂
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Glad that you smiled and liked it…:)
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Sweet story from a child’s perspective and making his mum stop and look instead of telling him off.
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Thank you Sally for your lovely words 🙂
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What a cute story Shivangi 🙂
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Thank you for reading and liking it 🙂
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Lovely…. children do tend to see things in a much better light than we do. Oh…. to be that young again!
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Yes..thank you so much for reading 🙂
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