He felt disoriented on seeing the picture. After rubbing his eyes, he looked again. Yes, there she was…prominent in her white bag and blue jacket, studying something.
How could this be true? His mind was probably playing tricks on him. When he had clicked that picture, there was no one around.
He was aging and she looked just the way she had looked on their last day in college.
Twenty years back, they had parted, ready to pursue their separate careers, fully aware that they would never ever meet again.
But she had surprised him by extracting a promise. They were to meet exactly twenty years later at this favourite haunt to celebrate their friendship.
He had remembered the promise and had gone to that spot. But how could he expect her to be there? He knew she had long been dead… soon after she left college!
(This is a tribute to ‘After Twenty Years’-a lovely short story by the great O Henry)
This is my entry to the flash fiction challenge, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers hosted by the lovely Priceless Joy. We are given a photo prompt and approximately 75-175 words with which to create our stories. This challenge is open to all who would like to participate. For more information, click HERE.
Painful, yet great story
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Thanks a lot Swathiπ
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Awww, this is so sweet! She met him at their meeting place even though she had died almost 20 years earlier. Love the sentiment! Great story, Shivangi!
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Thank you for your lovely words and summing up the story so wellπ
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It was a beautiful story, Shivangi!
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Big hug and thank youπ
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((HUG)) π
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You are such an amazing story teller…π
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Thanks a lot deae
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And if she returns? Won’t he piss in his pants?
I won’t make a ‘faluda’ of a great flash-fiction. Loved reading it!
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Thanks a lotπ
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wow – this was complex, painful and deep story – It has a great meaning to learn from…
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Thanks a lot Mihran for your lovely wordsπ
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Even death couldn’t stop her keeping her promise. I guess the word “haunt” in “this favourite haunt” has taken on a new meaning!
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Great Observation Ali…thank you for your lovely commentπ
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So sweet yet so sad. She kept her promise. Great story! π
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Thanks a lot for liking my storyπ
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You’re welcome π
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I thought you did a great job on this story Shivangi, so well done.
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So happy that you liked itπ
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Filled with e emotion. Beautifully written.
‘The Homecoming’ for FFfAW!
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Thanks a lot Keithπ
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Simply lovely.
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Thank you YS. Glad that you liked itπ
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Hey, i have nominated you for an award. head over to my blog under awards to find it. i’m inlove with your blog now
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Thanks a lot for your lovely words. I will try to respond to the award but forgive me if I don’t. My hands are too full.. But I am very grateful to you for thinking of meπ
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How beautiful, I wish I could scream this on the roof tops. Great indeed.
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Thanks a lot Joan for your sweet words. May god bless you and thanks a lotπ
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Great story. Her ghost was there, where they were supposed to meet 20 years after collage. I enjoyed this.
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Thanks a lot Mandi. Glad that you liked itπ
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Just as I was starting to enjoy, the end came as a blow.
Tragic!
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Thank you Alok… Kya karein word limit forced me to end it:) thank you for coming over.
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A love story or bitter sweet pain.
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Thanks a lot for the lovely commentπ
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My pleasure π
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So sweet, but I wish his sweetheart was still alive !
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I wish that too.. π thank you for reading!
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Quite some ‘promise keepers’, they are π
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Thanks a lot for the visitπ
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