Six Uri tribals saw the double rainbow from a distance and rejoiced! The time had come. For centuries, they had closely guarded the secret of Luma!
Everything had changed, the tribe had shrunk in size, and nobody believed in Luma anymore. But for those seemingly modern Uris, the legend of Luma was the very basis of their existence.
“Let’s drive towards the end of the rainbow. We will find her,” Bali, the leader said.
Their hearts sang when they found her in a car – a woman in labor. “I..I was trying to drive over to the hospital…,” she said weakly.
“Don’t worry we’ll take care of everything,” Bali said respectfully. And the others cheered in their hearts as Luma was about to be reborn!
(This my entry to the flash fiction challenge, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers hosted by the amazing Priceless Joy. We are given a photo prompt and approximately 75-175 words with which to create our stories. This challenge is open to all who would like to participate. Thank you @any1mark66 for the image. Please CLICK HERE for more.)
Wow! Would love to read more about this reborn God! Lovely story.
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Thank you so much Anurag. May be I will elaborate it some day😀
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Beautiful story with hope for the new future.
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Thank you Sir!
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Very well imagined (or is it a real legend?) Lovely positive tale and topical in the sense that we do need some great spirit to come back.
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No, it’s not real😀. Yes, we really do need a great spirit to come back😀. Thank you YS!
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The rainbow was definitely a sign 🙂
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Right Iain! Thank you for coming over😀
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Great story Shivangi! I wonder how the woman feels to be giving birth to their God Luma? Love the story!
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Glad you liked it PJ. Perhaps the woman didn’t know she was part of a legend. Only the six Uri tribals knew😀
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Hopefully, that is the case. I don’t think the woman would want any part of it. LOL!
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Hahaha true!
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https://dillkiavaaz.com/2018/01/20/kuchh-baatei/ agar time mile toh
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Reads like a myth in the making. So nicely done.
Ellespeth
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Thanks a lot Ellespeth😀
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Now I want to know more. Will Luma live up to anticipated expectations?
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I hope so Jacqueline. Thanks a lot for coming over dear. ❤️
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Oooh Shivangi this was a fiction? OMG! You fiction writers make believe….🙄😇😁
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Hahaha thank you Shiva😀
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