The Astons always look picture perfect. In gatherings like this, Lady Aston sings while Lord Aston displays his skill at the piano. And the usually haughty Miss Matilda, tries to be genteel.
But today, crack in the picture is showing. Look, doesn’t Lord Aston appear stern? Yesterday, the footman had confided that a perfumed letter arrived for My Lady. But Lord Aston grabbed it and tore it to pieces!
Lord Aston has no right to do that. Since his character is not without blemishes. He even tried to be sweet on me but I am a housemaid of integrity.
How I wish my peep hole in the kitchen was bigger! Soon, a drama is about to unfold in the parlour. I hope the author of the letter arrives and I get a chance to see My Lady blush.
I feel, Old Lady Olivia, whose portrait hangs in the parlour, disapproves of my sneaking ways but then, what harm can she do…she is dead!
((This is my entry to the flash fiction challenge, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers hosted by the amazing Priceless Joy. We are given a photo prompt and approximately 75-175 words with which to create our stories. This challenge is open to all who would like to participate. Thank you Louise with The Storyteller’s Abode for the image. Please CLICK HERE for more.)
HAHAHA! Reminds me of a juicy soap opera! But, had I been Lord Aston, I would have read the letter before I tore it up! LOL! Great story, Shivangi!!
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Hahaha.. thank you PJ😀
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Sneaky maid. Never safe when somebody is always watching. Well done.
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Thank you🙏🏻😀
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Hilarious! Wonderful storytelling, Shivangi. 🙂
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Thank you Tonya😀
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😊🌻🦋
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A delightful and totally different tale. I like!
My tale is called ‘One beautiful day’
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Thank you Keith… will definitely read yours soon😀
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such entertaining characters!
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Thanks a lot😀
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Such intrigue Shivangi, questions that want answers, so more could be written..
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Right Michael… lots of scope to develop the story further. Thank you😀
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Good one.
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Thank you bhaiya😀
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The entertainment of the “downstairs” people 🙂
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Right Ali… thank you 😀
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An interesting story with a mystery arising, Shivangi. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks a ton Suzanne😀
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Never underestimate the gossip and the information the downstairs possess! It sounds like a juicy scandal waiting to come out.
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😀😀😀that is true Chris… thanks a lot for the visit😀
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So this is why society has disposed of maids. Fewer people to be prying into to private affairs. LOL Nicely done.
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Hahaha true… thank you😀
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This was so fun to read! I love the main character here, and hearing her thoughts as the scene unfolded in front of her. Great take on the prompt, Shivangi!
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Thank you Jade😀
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Very cleverly done. Loved the read.
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Thanks a lot YS😀
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Lords and Ladies have always been my favourites. A very enjoyable read.
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This means you are well familiar with English literature😀👍. Same pinch!
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It’s my first love in genres. Anything Period and I’m sold – books, movies, shows, what have you 😁 thanks for the pinch 😉
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Me too…I watch period dramas a lot… 😀
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Lol! I’m really happy to meet you 😁😁
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Same here Pradita… I am glad I came across you and your blog!
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😀😀
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A very entertaining story. Ha! Ha! The walls have eyes and ears! I’m sure there were quite a few dramas that took place during those times.
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Thanks a lot dear😀
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Hey there Shivangi! I found your blog today, and I’m nominating you for That’s So Jacob’s March Blog Madness! It’s simple: find five interesting blogs today, copy and paste this comment to theirs, and give them a follow! Have a great day and if you’re so inclined, kindly come visit me over at http://www.thatssojacob.wordpress.com. Have fun spreading the blog love this month!
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Hey thank you Jacob, I am much delighted. Thanks a lot for nominating me.
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Great take on the prompt.
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So sweet…thank you
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Welcome,Shivangi!
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