I felt as if I had walked along that bridge, a long time ago, in a different age. Strange! That was my first visit to the historic Fort in a small town called Monger.
The guide went on and on describing every little detail about the kings and queens. But I was not listening! The lake was holding me in a trance.
I was seeing a pitiable face down in the lake, crying out to me, asking me to rescue her.
Instinctively, I screamed, “Hang on girl, I will help!”.
“Who needs help? Are you okay?,” the guide asked me. I nodded with some embarrasment.
Later in the tour, the guide showed us the portrait of a brave servant girl who had drowned in the lake while saving a princess from drowning.
It all came back to me. I looked closer and whispered – Shashibala!!!
(This post is dedicated to the maid, who saved my grandmother from drowning. When my grandmother was a little girl, she used to swim using an inverted earthen pot (matki), which slipped out of her hand on that fateful day. The brave girl died saving her.)
This is my entry to the flash fiction challenge, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers hosted by the lovely Priceless Joy. We are given a photo prompt and approximately 75-175 words with which to create our stories. This challenge is open to all who would like to participate. Please CLICK HERE for more. Thank you Joy Pixley for the image!
Thank goodness your grandmother was saved from drowning! So sad that the girl died trying to save her. Your story is wonderful, Shivangi. It makes me wonder if she was that servant girl in maybe, a previous life?
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Yes, she was… PJ! Thanks a lot for your lovely comment. Had it not been for the maid, we would not have been born…😀
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That’s so true Shivangi. The maid saved more lives than just one!
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True PJ😀👍
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Great story, loved the humour and drama. Tragic story about the maid dying saving your grandmother, a brave woman.
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Thanks a lot Iain😀
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What a lovely story, Shivangi!
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Thank you Tonya😀
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A simple yet moving story.
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Thanks a lot😀
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What a brave girl she was, to save someone else from drowning at the risk of her own life. And how wonderful that she is remembered and honored for that. Nice story!
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Thanks a lot Joy! Lovely picture😀
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This illustrate so well the pattern of life, many families have been given life by others.
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True Mike, thanks a lot!
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… a touching story….brave maid!
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Thanks a lot😀
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lovely story shivangi……
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Thanks a lot Sudhir😀
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😄😄
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The pattern of life, sometimes one has to end to pave way for the others to come forth. A very nice story Shivagi 🙂
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Very well said… Thanks Joy!
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Touching
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Thank you😀
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Great story and based on a true event too!
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Thank you Ali😀😀😀
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It was a lovely and a moving story.
It’s good to know such people still exist. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Moushmi😀😀😀
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Immortality – her reward! Beautifully told.
My story is called The Stranger
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Thank you Keith… Will read yours in a short while😀
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It was so brave of the maid to save your grandmother, It was so unfortunate that she lost her life in doing so. Thanks for sharing this touching story with us.
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Thanks a ton Jahnavi😀
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A wonderful tribute to a very brave girl.
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Thanks a lot dear😀
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Thank God your grandma was saved by a brave, selfless girl. Great story!
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Thanks a lot Indrajit😀
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A true tribute to Shashibala. Well written, Shivangi.
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Thanks a lot Sailaja😀
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This is a great tribute to the brave maid. Lovely write.
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Thanks a lot YS😀😀😀
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beautiful story immortalised in your retelling!
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😀👏Thanks a lot😀
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A very lovely, heartfelt story! Blessings come in many forms.
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True… Thanks a lot for coming over😀😀😀
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Your dedication remarks make this story all the more beautiful.
Wllespeth
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That is so kind of you Ellespeth😀
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Well done!
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Thank you😀
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Lovely story based on fact, Shivangi. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks a lot Suzanne😀😀😀
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