Mr Charming tried hard to fit the footwear into her feet. Was she the girl in the metro?
He had fallen in love when he was 20. He was travelling by a metro while she slept right across him with her face hidden under jacket. But what had caught his eye were her lovely legs which rested on the seat.
At one of the stations, she woke up with a start. And before he could catch a glimpse of her face, she ran out of the train leaving behind her stilettos. The crowd enveloped her. He lifted the footwear and kept it.
Life did not move on for him, though. Professionally, he became the proud owner of a chain of hotels. But he stayed single, in search of the gorgeous owner of those stilettos.
Occasionally, he would request a guest to try it on. They would do it willingly, but he never found the right legs.
This time, the stilletos fitted perfectly! He looked at her finger… no ring! Elatedly, he asked her to join him for dinner.
This is my entry to the flash fiction challenge, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers hosted by the lovely Priceless Joy. We are given a photo prompt and approximately 75-175 words with which to create our stories. This challenge is open to all who would like to participate. For more information, please CLICK HERE. Thank you Barb for the image!
I like the twist on Cinderella!
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So happy that you liked it Ritu😀
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Nice story 😊
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Thanks a ton Santosh😀
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The image fits really well with the Cinderella story – so well that I’m surprised I didn’t think of it before. That’s the way with the best ideas: they seem super-obvious after you’ve seen them, but you couldn’t think of them before. Great story!
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I am so happy after reading this comment. You are very kind. Glad that you liked it😀
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Ha! I was thinking Cinderella when I saw this prompt too! I love your story more! 🙂
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So sweet of you Nortina. This image immediately reminded of that famous fairy tale. I will come over to yours asap.😀
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So adorable and romantic:)
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That is so kind of you Oliana. Thanks a lot😀
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You’re welcome
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I love this modern day Cinderella story! I’m glad that he found the woman he has been searching for. Especially so that she hadn’t gotten married! Great story, Shivangi.
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Thanks a lot PJ. That image immediately reminded me of Cinderella. So glad that you liked it😀
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Yes, it did me too! I thought, “Modern Day Cinderella” so your story was perfect!
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😀😀😀 thank you PJ. Hope you enjoyed your quiet time😀
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I did! I really needed it. Got some rest in and I needed that.
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Take care and stay healthy!
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Thank you so much and you too! 🙂
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There’s always something magical about a Cinderella story Shivangi, so well done….
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Thanks a lot for your magical comment😀
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Aww! This is sweet Shivangi! Hmm.. I can smell a love story from the corner. ❤
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Yes Maria, thanks a lot😀
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You’re most welcome, Shivangi! 🙂
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Yay, his patience and persistence has paid off!
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Yes yayyyyy! Thanks a lot 😀😀😀
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How sweet. I like this modern version 😊
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Thanks a lot Jacqueline😀😀😀
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Sweet modern twist.
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Thanks you for visiting and appreciating😀
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Beautifully described.
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Thanks a lot YS😀. Looking forward to reading yours😀
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Lovely romantic story.! Modern cinderella 🙂
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Glad you liked it Jahnavi😀😀😀
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I like the twist and the happy ending. So many of us remain hooked into our past and jeopardize our now and future. A lovely tale!
@Samantha/samratkel from
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Very true Samantha. Thanks a lot for your lovely comment😀
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Yeah, modern Cinderella and Prince Charming too. Of course, the legs would be important! Great job on this prompt!
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Thanks a lot for your lovely words😀
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This is so, so sweet! I love the modern twist on an age old fairy tale 😀
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Thanks a ton Kay. Happy weekend to you!
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My pleasure!
Enjoy your weekend ☺
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Modern day Prince? Who knew! Lovely Lines 🙂
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Big thanks for visiting and commenting😀
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LOL… I guess I’m the only one that thought his attraction to a pair of legs without even seeing a face was a bit.. odd? The fetish is strong in this one. Still, if he found happiness, who am I to think otherwise? 🙂 I hope things worked out for them. Nice story, Shivangi!
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Hahaha… Everything is fair in the fictitious world. Thanks a lot for visiting and commenting😀
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Actually, I was inspired by an old Indian movie called Paakezah ( purity) in which the hero looks at the feet of sleeping heroine and falls in love with her. What he does not know is that she is a nautch girl! It is a lovely film. 😀
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Thanks for sharing that. I love learning about different cultures. 🙂
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A very sweet, romantic story. Fortunate for him that he never threw away the shoe and kept looking for her, and fortunate for her that she was not married and ended up with a guy that really, really, fell for her and never gave up.
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How nicely you summed it up… Thanks a lot😀
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You’re very welcome..:)
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Wow, can’t think happen in reality? Lucky man he would be 🙂
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Great story! 🙂
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Thanks a lot😀
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🙂
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Funny and sweet. Did she give him the ring instead? 😉
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Hahaha… I think so…
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