“Few knew about the castle hidden inside the island.” But whoever visited it marvelled at the history and architecture of the place.
Almost everyone noticed him too. A grand old man, busy cleaning and polishing the floors. He looked a part of the setting – cold, dark and mysterious.
He knew more than anyone else about the untold secrets of the past. But he chose to be quiet for the sake of his masters.
His young masters had migrated to a foreign land and he was not expected to work anymore. Yet, he continued doing what his forefathers did centuries ago.
Locals spread all kinds of stories about him. The scariest one was that he had been long dead and his loyal soul was serving the castle!!
He never reacted to any claim or story, he just worked!
(This story is a tribute to Satna, the caretaker of our ancestral home in a village in Jharkhand, India. He was a short, dark man who spoke very little. Since boyhood to old age, he served our family. He was a loyal and dutiful person, who reported daily to work come what may. He embodied the very essence of Karma Yoga – to attain perfection in action to live a fulfilled life! He passed away a few years back but we will fondly remember him always.)
This story is a part of the wonderful ‘Mondays Finish The Story Challenge’ by Barbara Beacham. She provides us with a photo prompt, the first sentence, and approximately 150 words with which we are to use to write our story. To take up the challenge click here – MFtS
Its a lovely tribute to Satna.
God Bless 🙂
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Thanks a ton for reading and commenting.
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All those rumours and the poor chap is just there minding his own business.
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Haha yes.. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. Stay blessed😀
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Lovely story and tribute!!!
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Glad you liked it😀. Thank you for reading.
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Loving reminicense about your caretaker. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you so much Susan for reading and lovely comment😀
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I liked this story when I thought it a fiction about a loyal man continuing to fulfill his duties. After learning that it’s a tribute to such a man, I love it. 🙂 A great tribute.
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Such a lovely comment… Thank you so much:)
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Unfortunately there are few like Satna today. At least in the west. A very enjoyable, ethereal, tale. Thank you.
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Thanks a lot for your kind words😀
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It truly is a lovely tribute to Satna! I enjoyed the story and the footnote about Satna was the icing on the cake!
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Thanks a lot PJ. I am so happy that you enjoyed it:)
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🙂
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Nice tribute. Made me remind of the caretaker from my grandma’s house. His name was Abel and he was certainly part of our infant hood.
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Great to hear that… Would like to read more about Abel in one of your posts. Thank you for reading😀
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If you don’t mind will you tell my Hi to adi and vir?
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Sure, I will:(
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Please don’t take any nonsense i comment seriously ok?Did you got the falling rain image i told?
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Yes Sherin…thanks a lot 🙂
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Sorry wrong smiley😀
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Thanks for the film
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The Satna breed is fast disappearing. Great write.
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Yes YS… Thank you for reading:)
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Sometime you really don’t know people the way you think you do. Good story and a great tribute.
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Glad that you liked it. Thank you for reading😀
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Nice tribute and nice take on the prompt.
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Thank you so much Indira😀
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I can’t help feeling a fondness for this dedicated old man. He is determined to carry on doing his duty, despite being left alone in the castle. Strange stories can start to circulate so easily – and become vastly more colourful (or scary) along the way. I suppose it’s inevitable that superstitious people will invent (or imagine!) ghostly happenings.
What a lovely tribute to Satna. He must have been a rare old man.
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Thank you for reading Millie. He indeed was a noble soul. He was from one of the tribal communities and his loyalty for our family was commendable. :). He would come on foot despite being sick . Yes, He was a rare man. Thanks a lot for your lovely comment.😀
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He was obviously dedicated to you all. Your story was a lovely tribute to him.
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Yes Millie, thank you
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Lovely tribute to such simple souls who balance the negativity of the world with their positive – “don’t need anything in return” attitudes. Nicely done.
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Thanks a ton Ansumani…glad you liked it😘
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That was a lovely tribute to Satna, Shivangi. I hard to find loyalty like that these days. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks a ton for your kind words… Yes, he was a rare man.:)
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Great story! Santa has more to be told.
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Thanks a lot for reading. Yes, Satna was very different:)
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