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She lived in a mango tree”. Her voice was the sweetest of all! Every spring, all birds and animals in the mangrove forest would assemble near the abandoned tree house to listen to her song of Dharma.
She sang, “Exert yourselves in the bright acts of merit, and shun the dark acts of evil!”
A traveller, who knew the language of birds, heard her. He was surprised to hear the Cuckoo’s didactic song. He planned to capture her.
He managed to capture her and put her in a cage. But she lost her voice after being confined and died soon.
Years later, while passing through that same mangrove forest, the traveller heard a Parrot singing the dead Cuckoo bird’s didactic song.
The singer had died but the song of Dharma lived on…
This story is a part of the wonderful ‘Mondays Finish The Story Challenge’ by Barbara Beacham. She provides us with a photo prompt, the first sentence, and approximately 150 words with which we are to use to write our story. To take up the challenge click here – MFtS
Lovely story, Shivangi!
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Glad that you liked it Sonya😀
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That is so sad that the cuckoo bird died after being captured and caged but good that her song lived on! Great story Shavangi!
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Thank you for your lovely words PJ😀
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I love this story!!! I wrote something about singing freely a while back you might enjoy https://tracesofthesoul.wordpress.com/2014/07/01/ogre-and-the-maiden-haibun/
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Thanks a ton Oliana… I am just coming over to yours to relish your post🙏🏻
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Hope you like it and that you think of joining MindLoveMiserysMenagerie …they have fun prompts for Tale Weavers such as yourself.
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Sure I will love to dear Oliana… I will check that out. Thank you😀
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Some great things never really die. They remain in a song, in a poem, in a story, in an art. Lovely tale. 🙂
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You summed it beautifully. Thank you for reading😀
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Always a pleasure.
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Your story immediately brought to mind the poem “I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings”.
Really beautiful – Thanks.
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Hey I will check out that poem… Thanks a ton for reading and appreciating😀
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Beautiful Story
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Thanks a ton😀
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That sounds like the sort of song which will always be passed down and sung throughout eternity. Nice story!
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Thanks a ton Draliman😀
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Good that her song lived on. Captivity is so cruel.
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Yes sally… Thanks so much for reading😀
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How beautiful that her song lived on even though her imprisonment caused her physical death.
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Thank you for your kind words Donna😀
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That’s a sweet little story, Shivangi. 🙂
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Glad you liked it Norma😀
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A sad but at the same time, an uplifting story.
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Thanks a lot, Francesca😀
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Amazingly beautiful story dear Shivangi. It reminds me of all those great people who have fought for the emancipation of the human race in so many ways and given up.their lives…but their messages have lived on. Simply loved the simplicity of your story that tells such a profound truth
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Thanks a lot Nimi… Your words are very encouraging. Glad you liked the story😀
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Very well done Shivangi! Another great tale! Thank you for participating in the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. Be well… ^..^
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Thanks a lot Barbara…. Take care and all the best for everything😀
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Hi Shivangi,
I love reading your short stories, you are so gifted!
Write On
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Thank you so much for the lovely words… And I love and learn from your posts😀
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Thank you,
You have been nominated for the Infinity Love Dreams Award,
Here is the link if you want to accept: https://vagabonvelda.wordpress.com/2015/09/27/infinity-love-dreams-award
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Thanks a lot VV. 🙂 I am so honoured and happy to have been nominated by you. Thanks a lot for considering me. But time constraints limit me and I want to, but cannot accept awards. But thank you again for your lovely gesture. Stay blessed:)
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You are very welcome.
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One cannot capture beauty?
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Yes, one cannot capture anything beautiful😀. Thank you for reading😀
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Lovely story.
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Big thank you Indira😀
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