“The cemetery spread along the area known as Devils Abode.” People believed that the entire stretch was haunted.
But actually, the Devil lived there!
Contrary to popular belief, the devil was a perfect gentleman. His task was to aid God in finding pure souls by luring away the sinners. It was his duty to be mean and conniving, so that only the best could reach God.
In the last few centuries, Hell had been a crowded place. And the good-bad balance was going haywire. And then along came Lucy Gray!
The child had died in a snowstorm while looking for her mother. The seven deadly sins had failed to lure her soul into hell for her faith was deep.
Now, it was His duty to tempt her.
But He felt He was fighting a lost battle for a change. To His relief, He was no match to the simple little girl’s pure soul. Lucy belonged to nature and God.
(This week’s response to Mondays Finish the Story is a tribute to one of my favourite poems Lucy Gray or Solitude by William Wordsworth. It is a great work in ballad form emanating purity and devotion. The poem is about Lucy Gray who got lost in snow storm while looking for her mother. My story is a fictionalised account of her life after death. You can read the poem here – Lucy Gray )
This story is a part of the wonderful ‘Mondays Finish The Story Challenge’ by Barbara Beacham. She provides us with a photo prompt, the first sentence, and approximately 150 words with which we are to use to write our story. To take up the challenge click here – MFtS –
Lovely… both the story and the concept…
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Glad you liked it😀
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I really liked this story. At least there is hope! I love how you used the character Lucy Gray from a poem. Lovely!
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Thanks a ton PJ..😀
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I enjoyed reading your story! Thank you.
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Glad you enjoyed Graham😀
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I wish I get to be as good as Lucy.
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I wish that too… Thank you for reading😀
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What an interesting story!
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Thank you so much for liking it😀
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~yay a happy ending! 😀 nice story
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Thanks a lot. Yours was very good.
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Love a story with a happy ending! Well done!
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Thanks a log Yolanda😀
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Absolutely lovely Shivangi! Thank you for writing again for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. Be well… ^..^
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Thank you so much Barbara 🙂
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YW! 🙂
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Beautiful story Shivangi capturing the innocence of the child. Loved it.
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Thank you so much Lata for reading and liking😀
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Very nice concept. I liked the idea so much.. 🙂
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A balance between good and bad ……. Neat.
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Thank you YS:)
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A lovely story…hope the balance prevails!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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I like the idea of the Devil being a sort of anti-hero, working with God to weed out the “undesirables”. Or maybe that’s just what he tells himself?
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Perfect interpretation:)
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Thank you for reading:)
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I like the portrayal of the Devil as simply doing his job. Thank you for the link to the poem – it’s not one that I knew. 🙂
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Glad that you liked it😀
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I loved the story and message in this as well. You are a gifted storyteller! Wordsworth is one of my fav poets. My only trip overseas was visiting England, Scotland and Wales. We stayed one night at Lake District where Wordsworth has his cottage:) I was also taking an English Literature class at university that year.
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I love English literature too… Great to have come across you. Your words are lovely😀
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Thank you, Shivangi, and for your welcomed visits to my poetry blog:)
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It is a beautiful blog Cheryl and you are gifted😀. Thank you for Twitter following.
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You are welcome.
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Love the story and characters.
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😀😀😀
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🤗😇🤗
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