I see absolutely everything. Even you, dear reader, I see you as clearly as you see me. I am not just a usual picture prompt for a story idea. I am real!
Come, look deep into my eye, and you will know all about yourself. You will be able to see where and what went wrong or right in your life and more – the little secrets that you have been hiding deep within you.
You will see yourself in all your nakedness. Yes, it will take guts to see yourself in that ‘undiluted form of truth’…so different from what others or even you think of yourself!
For, I am the eye of conscience. Nothing can escape me! Not even a little detail.
To look or not to look, it’s always your choice. But believe me, your life will be much straighter if you dare to see!
This story is a part of the wonderful ‘Mondays Finish The Story Challenge’ by Barbara Beacham. She provides us with a photo prompt, the first sentence, and approximately 150 words with which we are to use to write our story. To take up the challenge click here – MFtS
Stories by Shivangi 
Very nice job! “The eye is in the beholder.”
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Thanks a lot for reading😀
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Very deep thoughts. It is hard to view the truth, the rawness can overwhelm. Well done!
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Thank you so much for your kind words😀
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Love the line “if you dare to see.” Well done Shivangi! Thanks for writing again for the MFtS challenge and be well… ^..^
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Thank you so much Barbara for appreciating😀. Tk care
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Very nicely done! I don’t even want to try and imagine all of us standing around naked and viewing our “inner” selves. LOL! SCARY! 🙂
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😀thank you so much PJ for reading.
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I hope you know I liked your story, I was just giving it a hard time. We really all need to do that – be humbled and look at our “naked” selves.
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I know PJ, absolutely true. And I love your sense of humour😀
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Great and direct story. Very engaging!
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Thank you so much for your kind words😀
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I wonder if we would like what we see about ourselves when looking into this eye? Not certain I want to find out! Well written and clever!
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Yes, it is very difficult to see and accept truth. Thanks a lot for appreciating😀
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Very well done. I like what you did with the prompt and your exploration of our deeper self. 🙂
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I am glad you liked it😀
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It was very inspiring. Much like what I do on my blog, Susan’s Personal Blog. 🙂
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Great one Shivangi! It does pull you in. Loved the story.
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Thanks so much Lata😀😀😀
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Yeeks, I’m creeped out now! I’m not sure if I would want to look or not…
Great story!
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Thank you so much for appreciating😀
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Not everybody listens to their conscience, great stuff.
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You are right Sally… Even if we do, we don’t follow😀
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Wow ~ The eyes have it all ~ Deep knowledge of the inner unfaceable turmoil revealed in a blink ~ Well written Shivangi ~ 🙂
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You summed it up perfectly. Thank you for reading
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😀😀
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‘if you dare to see’ – love that. Great take on the prompt 🙂
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Thanks a lot for reading 😀
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It’s never easy to look at your inner-self in all its naked glory. A great take on the prompt, Shivangi. 🙂
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Yes, very difficult. Thank you so much for appreciating😀
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There’s something epic about this story. The grandness of it. It actually reminds me of Tolkien and The Lord of the Rings (when Frodo looks into the Mirror of Galadirel – there’s even an all seeing eye :-)), and that is one of my favourite books, so I don’t need to tell you I really liked your story!
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It’s one of my favourite books – so of course I misspelled “Galadriel”…
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Haha okay. Actually I have that book and have intended to read for a long time now. I will try to read soon😀
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That’s so kind of you Constantine. You have made my day. So happy that you liked it😀
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“The eye that can see right through you!”
Very well told about this eye.
If one makes the external eye to about turn,only then that eye can be seen. Isn’t ?
Won’t you see something interesting for you in my blog lately.
Fondest Regards,
Shiva
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Thank you … I will visit yours soon.. Regards😀
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