“What a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive,” wrote Shakespeare by the River Thames, as he created the character of Lady Macbeth. The evil woman would instigate her husband to kill King Duncan and usurp the throne. But the tangled web of her conscience would never let her be in peace.
However, the line did not fit in the play properly. Shakespeare furrowed his brow and discarded the page.
What he did not know was a smitten Lady had been watching him everyday. Soon after the Bard left, she picked the torn page for keepsake. The precious quote filled her with admiration for him!
Years later, Sir Walter Scott held that same paper handed down to him through generations. He incorporated the precious quote in his work ‘Ivanhoe’.
(This is entirely a fictional account on the origin of this popular quote. The only truthful part in the story is the fact that the quote is indeed a part of ‘Ivanhoe’ by Sir Walter Scott.)
This story is a part of the wonderful ‘Mondays Finish The Story Challenge’ by Barbara Beacham. She provides us with a photo prompt, the first sentence, and approximately 150 words with which we are to use to write our story. To take up the challenge click here: Mondays Finish the Challenge
Excellent Shivangi! I love how the quote found its way through history. Thanks again for your contribution to the MFtS challenge. Be well my friend! ^..^
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Thank you dear Barbara…lovely prompt again 😀😀😀
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Thank you!
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Historical fiction in so few words.. I liked it.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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This made me smile – the thought of the great bard coming up with such a well-known quote but chucking it away because it “wasn’t quite right” 🙂
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So happy that it made you smile 😀
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I love how you used the common belief that it’s a Shakespeare quote and turned it into a story – nicely done!
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Glad you found it nice Sonya😀
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Very well written, Shivangi, and excellent piece of historical fiction. I love how you brought Lady Macbeth to life and the reference to the quote in Sir Walter Scott’s ‘Ivanhoe’. 🙂
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Thank you Millie…I thought this was Shakespeare’s quote but when I checked I found out this other fact. Thus I wove the story 🙏🏻
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And it worked really well. You made it clear that Shakespeare never used the quote. 🙂
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Haha…yes, thank you.
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I like the way you managed to get the history in to the story.
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Thanks a lot😀
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Oh what a wonderful story weaving of the quote! Nicely done!
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Glad that you liked it:)
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Very interesting! I love how this quote often attributed to Shakespear and one which appears so likely to have come from him, finds it’s way back to him. Clever….
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Thank you so much😀
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A very interesting twist in the tail. I am sure Sir Walter Scott would have approved of your Shakesperian cast off theory. Great work Shivangi.
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Thank you so much John..so happy that you liked it 🙂
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I enjoyed every word, the history was brilliantly sewn together.
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Nothing better than a historical fiction. A nicely woven story Shivangi.
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Thanks a lot Norma 🙂
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Loved this historical fiction! In fact, I was a little disappointed that it is fiction. 😦 I thought you did an excellent job with the prompt.
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Thank you so much. Happy that you liked it 😀
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🙂
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Nice way to make history fun to read.
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Thank u so much for liking 🙂
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What a unique twist on the prompt, Shivangi! I love it!
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Thank u so much…
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You are most welcome!
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