Once upon a time in a land far, far away a king stood watching the battlefield he had just conquered. He noticed that there was blood and smoke from burnt corpses everywhere. The river which flowed along the battlefield had been stained scarlet. About 1.5 million warriors were dead.
The king was known for his exemplary warfare skills and ruthlessness…he was one of the greatest of all times. Once again he had proved his might. Riches, beauties, fame awaited him. This kind of bloodshed was not new to him.
But at that moment, watching that deathly still picture of blue and red, he felt something stir deep within him. The enormity and severity of his doing dawned on him. His sword fell from his hand and he wept in agony. The victor had just witnessed his greatest defeat.
(Based on King Ashoka the great and the Kalinga war. The conquest of Kalinga marked a turning point in Ashoka’s life and reign. Ashoka decided to renounce warfare. He sent peace missions to his Asian neighbours and turned to the teachings of Buddhism.)
This story is a part of a Mondays Finish the Story Challenge by Barbara Beacham. It is a wonderful contest in which flash fiction is created based on the picture and an opening sentence. Take the challenge here: https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/04/06/mondays-finish-the-story-april-6th-2015/
Great job Shivangi – I love that you’ve based it on a historical figure. it also reminded me of the ruthless battles led by Emperor Chin, who united China
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Thank you so much for reading…
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how do you write so easily? everything i write makes no sense and i end up hating it or deleting it
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You write quite well Jeffrey…I have liked your work…looking forward reading more of yours…
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Thank you. Working slowly lol
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Very powerful. Could this be a turning point for him, I wonder?
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Yes….king Ashoka went on to be one of the biggest followers of Buddhism. His tormented soul found peace in Buddha. I will add this too…thank you for asking.
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Loved this take of yours on the famous Kalinga War Shivangi. So how would you have taken this story further?
Shakti
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Shakti…thank you so much for reading. Later on Ashoka became a follower of Buddhism…this is a slice of history…I would have taken it in the same course 🙂
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I now see what you mean…interesting. Is this your history too?
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Yes…if you will Google Ashoka and The Kalinga war…you will find it. King Ashoka became a Buddhist after this…
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Wow – so cool. I will…
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Thank you so much fir reading.
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🙂
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Well done Shivangi! Is he now going to take up Buddhism? Wonderfully told tale encompassing history! Thank you for your continuing participation in the MFtS challenge, and I hope that you return next week… Be well…. ^..^
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Yes Barbara…he will become a Buddhist soon…thank you for reading. See you again next week.
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I look forward to seeing what you write next week! Be well…
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It is very clever how you integrated this into the prompt.
Very well written!
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Thanks a lot for reading 🙂
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Beautifully written Shivangi
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Great that you liked it Nimi…your works simple and adorable 🙂
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Thank you Shivangi
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